Friday, November 23, 2012
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Everyday thoughts of you run through my head.
I think of things and how they were in the past to now,
and all I can say is wow.
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Asif Andalib
24 November 2012
Beautiful write Aisha but I have a little suggestion about the form of poetry. You can write it in free verse. Just break the big lines into smaller ones. Keep on writing
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7/27/2025 4:04:24 PM # 1.0.0
Wow! I can truly relate to this poem! All the emotion is in this writing. As I read I felt your pain the further into it I got. As Asif suggested break the longer lines down into smaller ones and you're on your way! Great writing! ππΎππΎ