Tuesday, May 5, 2009

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She looked at him, tears spilling for being so naïve.
He watched her, voice breaking with pleading words ‘’please don’t leave.’’
She was torn, in the middle, confused by which road to take.
He knew it wasn’t easy, the decisions he asked her to make.
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Jesse Milligan 05 May 2009

Lovely poem. Looking forward to more work. =)

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Sarah Mc Cabe

Sarah Mc Cabe

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