Tormented Spirit, Rise Comments
When hope is gone,
And all left is pain.
When shots of a gun
Are all that you gain.
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Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.
I love this poem. Life can throw you some sour worms and right now im surrounded by them but i have a saviour...my daughter. She is worth living for, she is my world. Sometimes my 'straw' dissapears so i cant wait for the day i surface. GOOD WORK Tender Heart.
This is a beautiful poem and just what I needed to read. thank you for posting it here. I am sure all who read it will find strength in your fine poetic ressurection for lost souls. Smiling at you Tai
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7/23/2025 11:42:39 AM # 1.0.0
a bit long and wandering on....but very nice... i guess the length of the poem portrays the torture of a people suffering so long....and then it is just rt... beaut, lines :) sat