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That day after his birthday
my mind is tormented
by all those white walls
just like that long stare
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Mind is tormented by all those minutes concentrated. Heart is in deep torture and soul is deteriorated. Every sign of fear is amazingly presented in this poem with amazing photograph. Fear provokes thought and we get disturbance in mind due to fear. Still we hope for the bright rainbow and bright colour of light in life. An excellent poem is very well penned...10
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7/27/2025 4:56:32 AM # 1.0.0
my mind is tormented by all those minutes concentrated like the Boeing's departure penetrated my heart is in deep torture my soul deteriorated.....touching expression! A beautiful poem.....................10
Thank you so much for your worthy words, Dillip., and your ardent compliments. You are oft so kindest as to give my poetry an upbeat so loveliest worded. Thank you too for the 10 Most appreciated and stay Blessed, poet.