Sunday, January 21, 2007

Torment Comments

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Head held bowed.
Eyes half open.
Hoping no one notices me.
So I can remain hidden.
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David Harris
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Melvina Germain 21 January 2007

Yes, tomorrow they will forget leaving you saddled with the blame. You continue to feel hurt inside and no one cares. You will rise above and conquer in the end and where will they be, one can only wonder. Heartfelt feelings coming from within. Excellent poem David--Thankyou once again--Melvina

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Alison Smith 21 January 2007

Lovely poem.... makes you feel as the person feels... working through the desire to hide then the defiance of standing tall... Alison

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