Saturday, December 21, 2019

Topsy-Turvy World Comments

Rating: 5.0

A girl wore a long burqua1 at work,
But look at now time's peculiar quirk,
What she said starkly strange,
B'yond any belief's range:
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 December 2019

Changes and challenges! ! The world today. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 December 2019

Changes and challenges, yes indeed, it's really ironical.

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Kostas Lagos 21 December 2019

World changes, many times in a strange way.Lovely limerick!

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 December 2019

I appreciate your 'lovely' feedback, dear poet.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 December 2019

A brilliantly crafted limerick, sir Aniruddha...10+++

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 December 2019

Thanks Rev Bernard for visiting the poem and rating it

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