You came upon a mountain that seemed so hard to climb
To undertake a task so great will really take some time
As you held your head up high peering up to the top
Your heart began to race and your courage started to drop
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Reaching the top is relieving and gives a great feeling of achievement. Nice poem. Thank you.
The indomitable height of the mountain may scare us at first! But persistent effort and unflagging determination can help us conquer the impossible! A wonderful poem, very inspiring and motivating! !
at the bottom of that mountain you will find so many disappointments left behind, but as you look up to the top you know with perseverance you will not stop.
This is not just an ordinary poem, there are the philosophical meaning behind the beautiful lines that you write a wonderful poem, i really like it thank you for sharing
Life does at times equate to a mountain climb, some slopes are easy, some very difficult. Good write, very philosophical.
A very creditable poem providing advice to all who want to rise high in life.The poem is crafted very well adhering to the rhymes which capture the heart ! BEAUTIFUL!
A great assessment on how to climb life's mountain, just one step at a time. I'm nearly there and worrying about the descent.A smooth flowing, thoughtful write. Keep on writing
.......an inspiring poems.......no mountain is as high as human hopes...........unflagging determination will help us reach the summit! .........