Saturday, October 17, 2015

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Since turned SEXteen, I'm
enkindled by sensations strange:
itching, hot, but serene,
and try to seek rainbow
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Bri Edwards 16 August 2018

I may change viewd to viewed when I put this in my Sept.2018 showcase of poems by PH poets of the Indian subcontinent. [oh! did I mention streaching is stretching the truth of the spelling of stretching? ? ] I bet I know WHAT stretches towards her! NO! not THAT! ! Their hands, silly. the ending made me laugh; a small laugh but laugh it WAS. bri :) thanks. I hope you are surviving comfortably enough. bri :)

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Rajnish Manga 17 October 2015

I must thank you for a lovely portrayal of a teenager merging with youth with its own charms and fantasies as well as the fantasies of onlookers. Just amazing stuff. Thanks.

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