Ally Bell

Ally Bell

San Fernando General Hospital, Trinidad
Thursday, December 17, 2015

Too Young, Too Strong Comments

Rating: 3.5

They say I'm too young
To be feeling this way
To be thinking so wisely
The same song is sung
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Enoch John 19 January 2016

great feeling in poem.

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Hazel Durham 18 December 2015

Great rhyming, as you write from your heart, with lovely lines. I really enjoyed this beautiful write, well done Alisha!

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Kim Barney 17 December 2015

If you were born in 2002, you are indeed too young. Thirteen may be physically mature for some girls, but neither boys nor girls are emotionally ready for love at that age. Give yourself a few more years. Stay in school. Get a good education. You will never be sorry you waited.

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Ally Bell

Ally Bell

San Fernando General Hospital, Trinidad
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