Sunday, July 21, 2013

Too Young To Know Comments

Rating: 5.0

I tell youth now,
as I was once told.
'You're too young to know,
what life beholds.
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Elena Plotkin
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Bri Edwards 16 January 2015

i really, really want to suggest a tiny change in the poem; it only concerns a rhyme, not the meat of the poem, which is delicious. but i won't say, unless you beg me to say; well, you don't have to BEG! BUT you are a 'youth' compared to me, so you probably would not agree with what i would say! bri :)

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Khairul Ahsan 02 December 2013

These are words experience, whether they are heeded or not. A beautifully written poem, clear and simple, and that's its beauty.10/10. I appreciate the good rhyming too.

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Patricia Grantham 26 August 2013

A really good write this is. I was also told that I was too young to know when I was growing up. I guess there were things that our young minds could not understand or it was too high above our heads. Whatever the reason it must have been for my good. Enjoyed.

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Adeline Foster 22 July 2013

Ah! the voice of experience. And so it goes, they just won't hear untill it is too late. Read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 July 2013

there never is a greater truth! penned it so fine, poet.

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