So soon, the green wing faltered so soon
As the shadows grew short on the lawn -
It was more than the phase of the Moon,
More than the flight of the dawn -
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Excellent excellent! ! ! I refuse to comment on anything that I adore.....mmmmmmmm Pia
the heron summoned her too soon over the wooden bridge too soon past the stonehedge drive beneath an autumn moon and her shadow still waits.
Dear Will Your work seems to be going from strength to strength, a solid piece Love duncan X
Eloquent, nostalgic and quite exceptional. This one came straight from the soul without hesitation.Take care, Will. Warm regards, Sandra
Ok it's true that this is a re-visit to one of your gems Will, but this is such a wondefully written piece and the feeling pours over the page, amazing poetry from one of poemhunters finest, take care my friend Love duncan X