Friday, February 21, 2014

Too Quiet Comments

Rating: 3.5

Its too quiet in here, he said.
I told him silence was good for me,
with TV I can't hear my own thoughts
over all the yapping of strangers.
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Nika McGuin
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Valsa George 23 February 2014

, Two people, one preferring to be left in quiet and the other afraid of being in silence...! The latter is evidently in an agitated mood who can't reconcile with himself or his sinful past! The contrast is too sharp and beautifully drawn! Thank you Nika for reading my poems and leaving comments!

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Silence can be deafening to some. A powerful portrait of fear!

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