Many are days weeks and years.
Now am too old for salty tears.
Sadness replaced the youthful dreams.
Lost time won the battle to me it seems.
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The poem is melodious. You want to read it for it sweet rhythm. The rhythm is so sweet. The message is a harsh reality but true and unstoppable. I liked the contrast in; Sadness replaced the youthful dreams. I really like. Poetic and of literary values.
A great poem there..wonderfully written! But you are too young to talk old.
A great little poem Jack, I've been standing on the geriatrics ledge for years and it ain't scary any more.
A great poem, I guess we are lucky if we get old and not fall by the wayside. thanks for the interesting read.
Getting old is not much fun - but we're all on the same track. Short, to the point, and well written poem.
Beautiful poem, so emotional but it raised with wise....too old for tears but too human to not ignore some..its a life and that a part of our moment..tears not get aged by time because it belong to heart and feelings..but only wise can control and balance the thing deep inside..well written, loved it_Soul