Thursday, July 31, 2008

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So they sat on a beach, in reflection
talked of medicine's fatal direction.
Disagreement set in
when she said with a grin
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Raynette Eitel 31 July 2008

lucky you, lucky her...cute poem. Raynette

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Anong All 31 July 2008

funny :)

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silver phoenix 31 July 2008

Lol, great and very true, nice style, its unique. Please check some of mine too, perhaps youll like it.Rate it and comment if you can, constructive criticism is also welcome, if youre into small poems please read two. If youre more into complex poems check number 2 or 3. Thankyou, Kilian

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