Wednesday, December 7, 2016

Too Near Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is
No much distance
between truth and lie,
It is too near
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Hans Vr 10 December 2016

I love this ode to truth. Hen I hear Billy Joel's song, honesty, I love the way he sings it and but the subsequent statement that is so hard to find, somehow gives a sad tone to the poem. Your last stanza says it so well. Truth is all important. The more we search for truth, the more we find and it looks like a never ending series of circles. It was RW Emerson who has expressed the search of humans for truth in that way. This is also a wonderful and thought provoking poem, Kumarmani. Very well written.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2016

Satyam Shivam Sunderam, Truth is God and God is beautiful (Bhagvad Geeta) a great poem by Mahakul Ji.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 December 2016

The heat! But, don't cheat anyone. Nice piece of work.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 07 December 2016

At least the poet fights enough to grip the logical ground for truth only. Encourage this journey and congratulate the soul that bleeds!

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 07 December 2016

Truth is light And lie is dark Dark can't make Hide the truth always Truth must get out From several veils Of lies as sunshines From dark clouds An excellent write....10

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M Asim Nehal 07 December 2016

We feel happy while we speak untruth and take a great sense of achievement out of it yet within us we know the reality............Superb Poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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