Too Much...So Much Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Too Much...So Much

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your love gave both birth and death
your presence was felt and dealt with everyday
your expectations were my disappointments
you fought between want and feel...
to hell with your emotional instability
your too much attachment, killed mentally all
too much you have hurted.... so much i have suffered
Enough is enough, so... i move on....!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
move on, life has so much to teach you...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 03 July 2016

Between want and feel! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Welcome dear fir forur valuable comments, thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2016

Birth and death are mysterious incidences of life. Very amazing composition is shared really.10

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Biological birth and death is unpredictable, but some one special make our life and destroy it too, but life has to move on...commit for the one who really deserves it, thanks fir ur generosity of giving 10 perfect sir, love u take care

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