Too Much...Hurt Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Too Much...Hurt

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Fragile soul sings
betrayed love and trust
on the verge of tears
confused and clueless, lonely
broken heart, crushed to
fall apart any time
too much hurt can give
lose and envy of rejection
if you are one such, feeling useless
be the champion, to desire the formless
vision the shapeless dream
give up the self apathy
hold the line with equal strength
to direct your life of fullness.

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fragile soul song
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 05 June 2016

Very nice. Ups and downs come in life. Have to face and move ahead. Inspiring.

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Welcome dear pleased to read ur comments, well said thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 June 2016

Verge of tears! ! With the edge of life; problems everywhere. Love and hurt! Trying to gain strength once again. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Life is a mixture of love and hurt, thanks

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