Friday, May 6, 2005

Too Much Coffee Comments

Rating: 5.0

my work plodding,
my head nodding
need a caffeine break...
This Java's so strong,
...
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Chuck Audette
COMMENTS
Lekynn Ashton 06 July 2007

I can relate to this irksome habbit... So I've switched to 'decaff'... not sure who's fooling who though? ! Clever rhyming and witty wording! Love your sense of humour... g'nite? L

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Robert Howard 12 February 2007

'Kaffee, Kaffee, Kaffee muss ich haben! ' - sung by Lieschen in J. S. Bach's Kaffee Kantate.

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Poetry Hound 22 June 2006

Very clever, Chuck. I certainly relate to this poem. But sometimes there's no such thing as 'too much' coffee. Gotta have it, gotta have it, gotta have it.

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Ernestine Northover 10 June 2006

I know the feeling, I came back from shopping this morning and the first thing was - 'A Cup of Coffee' - then I was human again. Wonderful write. Thoroughly enjoyed the flavour. Love Ernestine XXX

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Tara Crown 25 April 2006

How very Shel Silversteinish this one is...a wonderfully happy rythym, a beginning, middle and a fun surprising end, and a moral to the story all in a tight little package! Alot of fun, thanks :) ~peace~ Tara

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Esther Leclerc 18 February 2006

I can relate entirely, Chuck! Nice poem. Thanks for the smile.

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

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