Saturday, April 3, 2010

Too Much... Comments

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Too much confusion
Too many tears
Too much hatred
Not enough love
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Amanda Austin
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Sara Tehrani 03 April 2010

it screams out so much sadness and pain, regret and need for love. very powerfull only thing i would say is that it might be too simple in terms of its language. try more imagery, dont be afraid to use your imagination and paint us images with metaphors and similes to understand and feel the emotions more... :)

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