Thursday, January 15, 2009

Too Many Goodbyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

The earth that supports
the path where I tread.
The smiles and the laughter
and you in my head.
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Melanie Walendowsky Baker
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Ying Escalona 13 April 2009

saying goodbye is heart piercing.....i guess..my heart have lots of holes too...nice work Melanie..so true

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lovely piece with great rhythm and a lot of feeling behind the words, great write :)

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John Smith 15 January 2009

Truly beautiful

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Cory Jensen 15 January 2009

I love it! ! ! ! ! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ..on a scale 1 to 10....a 12

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