Too Many Chicks Comments

I know the feeling I grow chicken at one time

Dreams too easily shattered there Jim, who knows perhaps you were made for better things, all the best Love duncan X

Brought a smile to my face. Don't count your chickens before they're hatched, though. Or put them all in one basket. -chuck

I thought she might have egged you on Jim, and let you have a crack at it. I adored chicks as a child too, we kept chicken then and they were always producing. A delight holding each fluffy bundle. they were wonderful. Good subject here, I enjoyed reading it. Love Ernestine XXX

Poem does make one think about their own failed dreams of fortune and fame nice one I hope this was what you were shooting for here.

i like the piece but must say as a vegetarian i have little lament over this particular spoiled dream