Conclusions should be drawn, but,
I have forgotten the words
to the most relevant song;
and frankly,
...
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A wow of a write Smoky. Absolutely superb...you are making the reader relate to you in this one.
This is a great poem, and I love your last stanza, very creatively written! Esp. written right before we begin anew, and may I wish you a very Happy New Year Smoky. {{{hugs}}}! !
Love the closing lines - better to look forward than to look back. Very inspired write Smoky, glad you wrote it! !
This is great Smoky, many of those wrong roads have given us strenth or friendships. Though I could have done with some navigation. Thank you
Life swings and turns Smoky, listen to the music on the breeze and travel forward, such a thoughtful write I really enjoyed reading (twice over) .thank you.
A great poem. Sometimes with have to get out what's in our head. More we leave it in there the more we can't get away from it. A great write.
I think this is amazing stuff, it might be some random thoughts you have but their tightly knit and compacted well together creating a really interesting work. Great stuff
Thanks Kevin, glad you took some pleasure in reading it.