Monday, December 24, 2012

Too Many Aversions Comments

Rating: 5.0

Conclusions should be drawn, but,
I have forgotten the words
to the most relevant song;
and frankly,
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Smoky Hoss
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Kevin Patrick 08 January 2013

I think this is amazing stuff, it might be some random thoughts you have but their tightly knit and compacted well together creating a really interesting work. Great stuff

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Smoky Hoss 01 October 2016

Thanks Kevin, glad you took some pleasure in reading it.

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Sara Fielder 05 January 2013

A wow of a write Smoky. Absolutely superb...you are making the reader relate to you in this one.

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Dee Corpolongo 27 December 2012

This is a great poem, and I love your last stanza, very creatively written! Esp. written right before we begin anew, and may I wish you a very Happy New Year Smoky. {{{hugs}}}! !

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Valerie Dohren 27 December 2012

Love the closing lines - better to look forward than to look back. Very inspired write Smoky, glad you wrote it! !

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Lyn Paul 27 December 2012

This is great Smoky, many of those wrong roads have given us strenth or friendships. Though I could have done with some navigation. Thank you

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Heather Wilson 26 December 2012

Life swings and turns Smoky, listen to the music on the breeze and travel forward, such a thoughtful write I really enjoyed reading (twice over) .thank you.

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Dave Walker 24 December 2012

A great poem. Sometimes with have to get out what's in our head. More we leave it in there the more we can't get away from it. A great write.

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