Thursday, April 23, 2015

Too Loud The Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don’t exactly know
When I fell from grace,
Nor—too—the wedding vows
That couldn’t keep pace;
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Rich in realism and reflection of relational realities that swims in the sea of sadness!

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R B Seals 02 February 2016

Thank you, Howard, for your adroit, precise and kind appraisal of the writing. Best wishes in all your endeavors!

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Susan Lacovara 08 May 2015

Chosen lifestyle changes often spill over...to change the lives of those innocents standing along side. A poignant depiction of this truth! You school us well.... PEACE

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R B Seals 28 October 2015

I believe someone once said, better late than never. Somehow I managed to overlook that I didn't respond in a timely manner to your accurate assessment of the true victims in such situations, Susan. Thank you so much for your contribution to the writing...take care!

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Darlene Walsh 04 May 2015

A sad poem on the death of love, and as frequently happens, the children frequently suffer the most.

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R B Seals 05 May 2015

Yes, a concise, accurate description of an all-too-prevalent condition in society today. Thanks for your input regarding this writing, Darla!

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