Sunday, October 16, 2016

Too Long Ago Comments

Rating: 4.3

Stealing away to a distant field,
hidden far from the lights of town,
we lay in the grass on a secret night,
watching the Perseids shower down.
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 20 October 2016

The eternity of the feeling we have when love inspires our soul! So greatly expressed.

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Barry Middleton 20 October 2016

Thank you Dimitrios, I always appreciate your comments.

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Susan Williams 16 October 2016

Stunning realistic love poem.... love in the sense of a man and a woman.... and love in the sense of looking up into the night sky and loving the universe. Love between man and woman may fade away and die out but that universe goes on without the stars that fall out of the sky.... and perhaps love between man and woman never really dies either as long as we can remember summer nights. I have no idea what gave you such a low score but it is so far off the mark for such a brilliant poem. 10++++++++++++++++++++++ and a posting on my list of favorite poems.

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Barry Middleton 16 October 2016

Thank you very much Susan. I do believe the scoring thingie is broken.

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John Coldwell 16 October 2016

touching poem sad and lovely

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Barry Middleton 16 October 2016

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. That you found it touching was certainly the intent.

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