Monday, June 17, 2019

Too Late To Wake Up Comments

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With time,
Life falls upon you
Like a ton of bricks,
And you realize
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Sandra Feldman
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2019

With time Life falls upon you Like a ton of bricks, ...... outstanding conceptualization. Brilliantly put.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 June 2019

Never too late to wake up to a new dawning. If the comma after stupid is intentional, then indeed, avoiding mistakes is stupid. The ignorance of youth is very well expressed in this thoughtful poem.

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Kostas Lagos 17 June 2019

Never too late to learn something. Well written

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 June 2019

this is life every moment is important to wake up

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