Thursday, July 23, 2009

Too Late For Living Comments

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I sit in the corner,
depression im bleeding.
I sit in the corner,
barely breathing.
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Everlasting Nightmare
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Tiya Sen 23 July 2009

the pain and loss of hope is so real that i felt like hoping you do not ever face it. very powerful writing.

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Milica Franchi De Luri 23 July 2009

First i have to say that i like your poem it is well penned, you have poetic notions and keep on writing, it is so therapeutic...........what stands between you and a different life is self exceptance and the maters of making responsible choices which will empower you with new way of thinking, life is to be lived....death will come whether we like it or not

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Branden Aeling 23 July 2009

i must very close to what i used to feel before i found Jesus and learned how to be loved by the one true king.

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