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Years of wonders and tears
Tears of anger and confusions
Confusions about all unanswered questions
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The heartbreak of never knowing your mother is hard to bear, as you described so effectively. Nothing can alleviate the pain of what could have been, of never knowing the truth. Very nicely written. I like how you repeat the last word of a line and use it as the beginning word of the next sentence.
It is hard, as I was adopted and never did find out my true identity. I'll never get over that, being adopted is a life trauma, but I'm learning how to cope with it. Everyday is different, but some days are harder than others...the day I wrote this piece, was definitely a bad day for me. I'm just hoping that I'll be writing again soon...I haven't written a poem ever since; it's been 6 years. Feels like my mind has been blank ever since, and it's not a good feeling at all.
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7/30/2025 4:05:00 PM # 1.0.0
Now she's gone. With the muse of the pains of love. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Edward for taking time to read. Always nice to get feedback.