I see you there across the room
I never thought I’d see you too soon.
Remember when I wanted you but,
You were too cool and just kept shut.
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Interesting contrast here between the words expressed and the emotions experienced. You have no power over me, yet your nearness renders me powerless to control my reaction to your presence. A very nice consideration of the fragility of the human heart. How fickle we truly are.
I guess you told him a thing or two! I love this poem. Great stuff Sienna. Congrats!
A very empowering write. Filled with positivity. I liked it very, very much. Reading your lovely, lovely words has made my day. It came from the perspective of pure gripping strength. Well done and congratulation.
A relationship needs to be taken care of by both the parties and more so when it stems from a love affair. It is better to secure it with trust rather than to squander it by being selfish. Thanks. You lead me on and broke my heart Why now do you appear? When I am happy without you here
Too Late! We ought to guard ourselves against lateness. It's a nice poem!
Remained me of Dolly Parton's song 🎶 'It's too late'. An insightful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing Sienna and do remain blessed.
I am a bit sad that the door has been closed permanently...thanks for sharing.
Time and tide wait for none, Once it is gone... will never come back................ love also is like that..... very well written, Sienna - Thanks
Beautiful love poem. It seems like a push and pull affair Sienna. At the same time you have made up your mind and even though there is still some feeling there is no going back. You now know who you are.Your heart was broken your trust decreases and it will take a long time to pick up the pieces. Full marks Sienna