Too Hot To Build A Fire Comments

were they? now i would view chimney with different eyes.

very casual but intelligently cautious is the imagery build...slow whispering tone suits the cold atmosphere created in the poem...beautiful way of poem telling 10

There's a sensitive pause in bewilderment - somewhere between the fur growing delicately on yogurt and the gentle onset of decaying grey squirrel odours... yeah, likely it would be too hot to build a fire! Rgds, Ivan

Ah too funny. My squirrels didn't die, they just did gymnastics in my attic every morning. Thumpa, thumpa, POW...rumble rumble rumble! The yogurt I get. In fact I have a sisterhood of ants dancing in my kitchen right now. Ah maybe tomorrow I'd do the terminator, 'I'll be BAAK! '