Thursday, August 6, 2020

Too High To Reach Or Nothing Comments

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the heights - too high - can't reach
the head, the hands over the emptiness
it stands like the earth pole line - unshaped
dead all beneath the roots of it
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2020

No boundary for the imaginative mind! ! But the physical body faces the odds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 August 2020

Height is a mind's perception. It may look too far or unreachable but a resolute and determined mind can climb high and reach the destination.With confidence and faith in God, nothing is impossible...... God bless you Mahtab to reach glorious heights........10

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Aarzoo Mehek 07 August 2020

As long as we hold tight to the rope of faith nothings fades. Keep plodding till your hands are full of god's gifts. Very nice poem Mahtab.10++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 August 2020

POLEEEEE HOLEEEEE GOALLLL runninggggggg drivinggggg losingggggg high LOW MY LOVE WHAT THIS POEM TELLSSS? ? ? ?

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Varsha M 06 August 2020

Good words for faith indeed.

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