Too Far, Too Fast Comments

Emma your poetry sounds like you have good instincts. Listening to ones intuition can take one far in life. Keep up the good work.

The problem with a lot of poems (mine included) is that they go on too long and lose their message. You didn't. You told what you wanted to tell in the time needed to tell it.

Great poem, Emma! ! ! You did great with the repitition in the poem.It's like to hear a nice song with a good repetition in the last lines.A nice short poem! ! ! Keep going on that way! ! You're doing a great job...

i like this poem i like the repitition and use of language well done 10+++