Monday, October 5, 2020

Too Early.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Too Early….

I got up too early
the world seems to have ended
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2020

It is so sad if you do not hear the chirping birds. Mind can be glorious when birds will chirp. We think you have got up so early. When perfect dawn will arrive birds will chirp. This is so sad if newborn baby had fallen down from nest. Baby bird should be protected and take care of. Oh, this is so sad and so sad to hear that baby bird died at last. May bird's soul rest in peace! ..5 stars..

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 October 2020

She gets up early to take care her child She concerns to her child coz- it's not bIood, it's life

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Deluke Muwanigwa 05 October 2020

Nice poem. Condolences for the birdie in your tree its spirit now free no more tweeting on twitter or on your bedroom window like on facebook.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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