Tuesday, May 21, 2019

Too Deep To Impart Comments

Rating: 4.5

The ink of my quill
The sigh I spill
The feel of my thrill
The blank I fill.
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Besma Dziri
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Chinedu Dike 14 January 2020

A poignant bit of verse nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing, Besma.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 June 2019

The ink of my quill The sigh I spill The feel of my thrill The blank I fill. A poem in my heart Too deep to impart. Wonderful expressions. this portrays the struggle of a poetess and a poet. we all experience this everyday. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Besma Dziri 08 June 2019

Thank you so much for so much appreciated visit and comment. My pleasure. Best regards.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 May 2019

The memories to peel The dormant to spiel The pain to heal The wound to seal. A dream into my soul Too wild to control. beautiful poem, fine rhyming. fine graphic. very fine. thank u dear poet. tony

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Besma Dziri 22 May 2019

Thank you so much for such beautiful comment! Deeply humbled.. My pleasure..Best regards.

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 May 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Besma Riabi Dziri. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Besma Dziri 22 May 2019

Pleased to read such kind words, Jazib.. thank you so much.. Looking forward to reading your poetry..

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