Thursday, June 5, 2014

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an infatuation grew in me.....outmoded..outlandish...illogically true......how about a short love story..?

And got hooked
but, who is that crook?
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Soumita Sarkar
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Unnikrishnan E S 24 February 2017

Hi Soumita, A good poem of love and passion. But your passion for rhyme without reason made you compromise on POETRY. Pl see for yourselves: Man you are mad! After that I am sad Who is labelled bad? This close connection Has made us true glad. More rhyme, less poetry here. Truly unlike your other poems. You always do retain quality of your poetry above all. So my request, please do not give in for the temptation of rhymes, play of words etc, at the cost of poetic quality, brevity which are truly characteristic of your poems. Would love to read more of them.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 February 2017

Hi Soumita, Love teaches you a lot. How true, ..

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Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

Franklu, not as good as the other poems of yours that I have read, but it does speak of something really valuable... Love always begins with infatuation and if it doesn't change from their into something more mature and rational... Ya, it's complicated. Thank you for sharing..

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