Tuesday, December 8, 2020

Too Cold Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the first ray of the sun
Grazes the roof of my hut
I feel its warmth and come
Out to take a long walk but
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Dr Antony Theodore 08 December 2020

Cool wind of morn sends A shiver down my spine Back I go to my hut and Watch the high hills shine. Watching all the wonders of nature and forget the pain. very fine poem. tony

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Practicing Poetess 08 December 2020

Ah, that first ray of morning sun can fool you. Actually, the sun can shine brightest on the coldest days! A well-written poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 December 2020

if it snows at ur place wear woolen warm jackets and clothes here who ignore get HYPO THERMIA kids unknowningly we heard had died minus wow tc pal TAKP

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