Tuesday, December 1, 2015

Too Busy Loving You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was too busy loving you
To ever notice the signs....
The ice forming on the river,
The snow gathering in the pines
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Lora Colon
COMMENTS
Kassem Oude 02 December 2015

Bad Weird I intended to nestle in lush spring Dreaming to brim heart of all lures Severe storm stole my lovely ring It turned me moaning troubadour.

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Jak Black 01 December 2015

A lovely poem, Lora. Blinded by love...Utopia, , , , , , then reality, the fire had gone out. Cleverly crafted, perfect rhythm and rhyme. I really like this one.

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Kim Barney 01 December 2015

Lora, I love this one! Well-written, indeed. I am going to add it to my favorites list.

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Shakil Ahmed 01 December 2015

a well presented thought, well composed poem, thanks for sharing

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Claudine Riel 01 December 2015

Beautifully put together. Thanks for sharing.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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