Tonight....im gunna fly
Circumnavigate the globe
And swoon and swoop
Dip and dive
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A wild and ethereal ride. Sounds like some of my dreams. Just racing with the moon
Woooooooooosh! You have too much energy for me, tonight, Karen! lol! I like it BECAUSE of it's high-level verve, and inventivity...That, and a balanced speckling of effective imagery makes this piece yet another winner for your literary jacket! ~FjR~
The feast of flight and fantasy....cross maintains un planed by mans course hand - a stunningly beautiful and damning line on our increasingly Corizon world. The crescendo of the last 2 lines delivers an image of a group of friends out for fun spontaneously breaking into a cancan dance in a public place like a flash mob. Exuberant free form verse in lyrical excelsior.