Friday, July 13, 2012

Tonight...Why Ever Not! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tonight....im gunna fly
Circumnavigate the globe
And swoon and swoop
Dip and dive
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karen sinclair
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Danny Draper 16 July 2012

The feast of flight and fantasy....cross maintains un planed by mans course hand - a stunningly beautiful and damning line on our increasingly Corizon world. The crescendo of the last 2 lines delivers an image of a group of friends out for fun spontaneously breaking into a cancan dance in a public place like a flash mob. Exuberant free form verse in lyrical excelsior.

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Chuck Audette 16 July 2012

A sensory festival! Wonderful!

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Joseph Anderson 15 July 2012

A wild and ethereal ride. Sounds like some of my dreams. Just racing with the moon

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Captain Cur 13 July 2012

Ride em cowgirl! Yeehah!

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Woooooooooosh! You have too much energy for me, tonight, Karen! lol! I like it BECAUSE of it's high-level verve, and inventivity...That, and a balanced speckling of effective imagery makes this piece yet another winner for your literary jacket! ~FjR~

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