Saturday, April 26, 2008

Tonight, When I'M With You (Original Poem Structure) Comments

Rating: 4.4

Tonight, When I'm With You,
All is calm, All is beautiful,
All reflects the beauty inside of you,
And my soul is ever so thankful,
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Geovanni Leaño
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Edwin Empestan (alba) 04 May 2008

Nice Poem 'Geo'. But always bear in mind that 'Beauty is skin deep'. Go for the intangible part of beauty and that is intelligence and character. Well penned and continue writing and be inspired always!

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Sara Neame 01 May 2008

Again, lovely meaning behind the words. Love it!

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Kee Thampi 27 April 2008

the blessed one and God told him to love she love a berry to eat.... and this poet bent to.....? Tonight, When I'm With You, All is Blessed, All in divine, All resembles my love for you, And

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Marvin Brato 27 April 2008

You have the talent to write romantic poems that are filled with substance and passion! A 10.

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Geovanni Leaño

Geovanni Leaño

Zamboanga City
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