Friday, April 1, 2005

Tonight The Moon Comments

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Tonight the moon
hangs in the weeping willow,
a silver ornament,
in golden branches.
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Martina E. Elenbaas
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Herbert Nehrlich1 02 April 2005

In the second stanza I would replace 'moon' with 'light'. Good poem. H

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