Tonight I Will Make You Mine Comments

Though sensual poem is good and expresses romantic passion with in poetic border line Tonight my dreams will come true In my arms I will hold you -nice romantic line Tonight I won't switch off light To see you and feel alright -what does it mean? OVER ALL NICE POEM. -KAVIN CHARALAN

tonight i will make u mine cos ur body is like old wine. wow! i love this poem Asif. love freely express with the desire of wanting. nice expression.

This is superb. Wel done asif

another one touches my heart...the last lines are excellent

A good romantic write right from the heart.Hope your love would like it, Thanks for the kind invite to read this poem Also my thanks are due for going through my poems and offering your kind remarks. Best wishes, Chandra Thiagarajan

excellent wat a great poem......

a top one well done god bless u

lovely composition...

An outpouring of the sweetest love, so fine, just liked old wine! Beautiful write!

Old wine tastes better; so is this muse of your romantic poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

You are very well known as a romantic poet and writers, you have that skill tht able to melt red blooded feeling into the jar of heart..nice work, keep it up_Soul

very nice.full of love and passion.liked it.

very nice.full of love and passion.liked it.

like that sweet shadow.... I will always be an avid reader of ur creations, not for u may be happy, but they are so passionate, full of brilliant expressions, & a longing desire to unleash.........

very emotional and beautifully crafted...really enjoyed this one

Dear Asif , your poem is very emotional and beautiful...i love it.