Wednesday, May 2, 2018

Tonight I Saw A Shadow Fly Comments

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Tonight I saw a shadow fly
As it does, does my innocence die?
and I ask myself, why? , why?
No answer comes, I sit and cry
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David Guild
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Chinedu Dike 07 May 2018

Witty introspection written with clarity of thought and mind. Well conceived and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing David.

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 May 2018

Very impressive write, Andre. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Naila Rais 02 May 2018

A wonderful poetry.. Keep it up.. 10 ++.. Read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila

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Robert Murray Smith 02 May 2018

The shadow of self evolves. It finally becomes real as we step through the past.

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Andre Labatt 02 May 2018

Thank you very much, Robert

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 May 2018

Dear Andre, such a well penned poem👍👍👍

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Andre Labatt 02 May 2018

Thank you very much.

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David Guild

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