When the sun has set
I forgot to see,
or was obsessed in
another whim,
...
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For the image-setting and the expression of your inner-self, this poem is quite a readable and enjoyable experience...to read, to feel, to visualize...the turn that comes with BUT has a special feel here...very good poem neela! and very near-perfect imagery! ! !
I'll weep tonight. why? I do not know Perhaps you may know- very nice
Very nicely written, I found it extremely moving and touching! :)