Tonight
As I sit
Under the locust tree
Letting my dinner digest
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I love the frantic calmness you've invoked. The usage of visuals that Speak flowing down stream. Thank you for sharing
I appreciate you comment and you taking the time to read my poetry.
Very nicely and aptly presented. Excellent collocation. A beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks for sharing. .....10
Remarkable and very vivid observation excellently expressed. It is true that the Chinese are never really expressive of their emotions and usually appear solemn and detached.
The imagery is vivid, has a clue to extreme performance. well read, thanks