Saturday, April 25, 2015

Tonight As I Sit Under The Locust Tree Comments

Rating: 4.8

Tonight
As I sit
Under the locust tree
Letting my dinner digest
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Raymond Farrell
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Pijush Biswas 07 April 2016

The imagery is vivid, has a clue to extreme performance. well read, thanks

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Nel Omofolarin 05 August 2015

Smooth imagery...beautifully crafted

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Kewayne Wadley 14 June 2015

I love the frantic calmness you've invoked. The usage of visuals that Speak flowing down stream. Thank you for sharing

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Raymond Farrell 15 June 2015

Thank you for your very insightful comment.

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Lyn Paul 03 June 2015

Extremely calming, presented so beautifully.

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Raymond Farrell 03 June 2015

I appreciate you comment and you taking the time to read my poetry.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2015

Very nicely and aptly presented. Excellent collocation. A beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks for sharing. .....10

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Raymond Farrell 28 April 2015

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I appreciate it.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 27 April 2015

Remarkable and very vivid observation excellently expressed. It is true that the Chinese are never really expressive of their emotions and usually appear solemn and detached.

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Raymond Farrell 27 April 2015

I am glad others have observed this as well as me.

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Gajanan Mishra 25 April 2015

devoid of expression, I like it.

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Raymond Farrell 25 April 2015

Thank you for your comment I appreciate it.

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