Sometimes words loose meaning
Like on this grim and depressing night
Today even my own image
Expunge me with renewed dread
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Cant agree with Payal... Loosing is the apt word here.... I'm impressed by your poems...
the sentiment is interesting but perhaps if a little more attention was paid to correct grammar, it would be far less distracting. losing is pselt loosing, advise is spelt advice etc, changing the meaning entirely.
Thanks Yadi & Payal....