Tuesday, October 11, 2005

Tonight Comments

Rating: 4.0

Sometimes words loose meaning
Like on this grim and depressing night
Today even my own image
Expunge me with renewed dread
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Deepa Thomas
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Deepa Thomas 14 November 2007

Thanks Yadi & Payal....

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Yadi S 13 April 2006

Cant agree with Payal... Loosing is the apt word here.... I'm impressed by your poems...

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Payal Parekh 11 October 2005

the sentiment is interesting but perhaps if a little more attention was paid to correct grammar, it would be far less distracting. losing is pselt loosing, advise is spelt advice etc, changing the meaning entirely.

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Deepa Thomas

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