Tonight Comments

I love this poem Cassandra! I love this verse, 'Let the moon wash her soft rays upon us, Enjoying the soft, swirling mist.' Sounds like a peaceful evening with a dear pet. (dog I assume)

So beutiful sis! ! I give this a 10 too! : D Exellant!

Absolutely, true love, endearing and tender

So sweet! Loved the poem for its softness, its simple, gentle narration. Pure and serene feelings. Is the 'you' in the poem your friend Keiko? The last stanza is superb, and the last two lines worth repeating: 'As dawn slips into day, You slowly, yet quietly slip away., ' Simply wonderful,10/10!