Tonight Comments

A delightful and enjoyable moon poem with a nice desire

Hello Madam, another lovely piece, especially loved the line I'll nibble the solid rays soaking it in my desire. The irony of you wanting to soak rays (the rays that literally soak you) is remarkably beautiful. :)

Full moon night in the forest. All alone. Moon peeping through the tree branches. Beauty nicely described. Thank you.

Sometimes it is desirable to remain alone and watch the nature at work. Lovely poem.

Imagery so chosen that kills nibbling rays wish to have light more knowledge thank you may Allah extinguish your desire