Thursday, June 15, 2006

Tongue-Tied Tim Comments

Rating: 5.0

A loving lad, is tongue-tied Tim.
And if you already know of him,
You'll know he's neither daft or dim,
But strong of heart, and tall and slim,
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Ernestine Northover
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Esther Leclerc 28 August 2006

Sweet and kind message, Ernestine, just like you... Everyone has a story; you've told this part of his beautifully! Love, Esther : ]

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Duncan Wyllie 16 June 2006

A wonderful tribute for all those that struggle with such a dilema, they can be seen beyond their difficulties Love Duncan X

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Patricia Gale 15 June 2006

Clever and a well told story. Splendid rhyme, I did enjoy. Patricia

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WELL CRAFTED WORK, ERNESTINE...STRUCTURED CRISP&W/ IN-SYNC RHYME....& A THEME THAT COULD DO NO LESS THAN WARM THE HEART '''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Joseph Daly 15 June 2006

This is a ouching and joyful poem, Ernestine. Some of it reminds me of my elder sister. I think that it is a very masterly rhymed structure. But then it is you that has written it.

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Funny, with a message. Well written.

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