A loving lad, is tongue-tied Tim.
And if you already know of him,
You'll know he's neither daft or dim,
But strong of heart, and tall and slim,
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A wonderful tribute for all those that struggle with such a dilema, they can be seen beyond their difficulties Love Duncan X
Clever and a well told story. Splendid rhyme, I did enjoy. Patricia
WELL CRAFTED WORK, ERNESTINE...STRUCTURED CRISP&W/ IN-SYNC RHYME....& A THEME THAT COULD DO NO LESS THAN WARM THE HEART '''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
This is a ouching and joyful poem, Ernestine. Some of it reminds me of my elder sister. I think that it is a very masterly rhymed structure. But then it is you that has written it.
Sweet and kind message, Ernestine, just like you... Everyone has a story; you've told this part of his beautifully! Love, Esther : ]