Friday, January 27, 2017

Tongue Tied Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've been tongue tied before but never like this
Not when I'm staring at your lips thinking about a kiss
Feeling my heart rate increase w/ every glance at your eyes
I know we've had some bumpy rides
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Jeremy Willson
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Sister Frances 28 January 2017

Jeremy God bless you for being tongue tied so you could write this gem of a poem :)

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Jeremy Willson 29 January 2017

Thanks siss this poem is about my special someone, I swear she always leaves me tongue tied I'm surprised I can tell her Good morning at school lol

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Mj Lemon 27 January 2017

Great poem. I find the title ironic. This flows like some of the very best slam poetry I've ever read. A great work.

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Jeremy Willson 29 January 2017

That is high praise friend thank you very much for your comment I appreciate it :)

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Jeremy Willson

Brandon, FL
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