Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, January 6, 2014

Tongue Has Power Comments

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Tongue has enormous power
Very thunderous impact like shower
It can be heard like cloud’s sound
If ever you are lucky to witness scuffle round
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Gail Desautels Mmm yes. I try to stay private when like that. Not possible for some reason. Hmmm kind of like training dogs... Sometimes you have to be gruff and speak in a language they understand. But you are right. Calm breathe reflect first, if possible.. 6 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Douglas Scotney 06 January 2014

nice idealism MHA. Shouldn't it be '...restraint in use...'?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Gibz Rising likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Great poem krishna Middela2 minutes ago Nice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Rhyme Kay Walker4 minutes ago Effective word choice and the rhyming flowed well. Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Leanne Ferguson4 minutes ago Keep writing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2014

Tongue has enormous power Very thunderous impact like shower

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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