Thursday, April 21, 2005

Tomorrows Child Comments

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Why are you in such a hurry to grow up?
Relax a little, take your time, slow up.
There's no rush believe me, you need to slow down
Chill with friends, watch TV, go out on the town
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Bridgid Patrick
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Ernestine Northover 08 November 2005

Not bad, not bad at all. This is a similar subject to a poem I have written called Childhood - The 21st Century. Sincerely Ernestine

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Daniella Chepandova 26 April 2005

:)) sweet, I like it! I read all of your poems- very nice job! ! ! Looking for more, Daniella C.

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